Looking good, I think you have made some great changes. I really like how you changed the font on the television, and I think you could consider changing more of the font of sans serif so that it fits together nicely. Good job so far, keep working!
Great changes! i love the simplicity of your video. i agree that you could add more of the san serif into the rest of the speech to carry that through as a design element. Can't wait to see the final video.
It looks so great! I love the changes, the TV part looks really good and the timing on the words catching each other (really bad description but I hope you know what part I'm talking about) is MUCH better!
Your motion is nice. it is simple, but it is strong. But at the beginning of the motion, in terms of "I made my mistakes ~ But in all", the font size is a little bit big.(I think)
I really, really like the part "I earned every cent". TOO COOL! I have to agree with sara and lauren. The whole speech is consistent, but also kind of predictable. Gray and music might help; not sure. The "public life" does seem a bit awkward in its movement. Remember to fix the "Never Justice" part, where some of the white in Justice seem to be poking out. Great Job!
I like the simplicity of your video. It makes the movement pop more. I like the use of the camera as well. Just keep doing what you're doing and it will look great.
The way the type moves and the speed at which you have the transitions happening completely matches the way that the speaker talks. I think that you have a very good variety of transitions.
Looking good, I think you have made some great changes. I really like how you changed the font on the television, and I think you could consider changing more of the font of sans serif so that it fits together nicely. Good job so far, keep working!
ReplyDeleteGreat changes! i love the simplicity of your video. i agree that you could add more of the san serif into the rest of the speech to carry that through as a design element. Can't wait to see the final video.
ReplyDeleteIt looks so great! I love the changes, the TV part looks really good and the timing on the words catching each other (really bad description but I hope you know what part I'm talking about) is MUCH better!
ReplyDeleteYour motion is nice. it is simple, but it is strong. But at the beginning of the motion, in terms of "I made my mistakes ~ But in all", the font size is a little bit big.(I think)
ReplyDeletei like the change to sans serif around the tv...its a good start
ReplyDeletemusic maybe?
tv looks really good. maybe mess around with size change and maaybe some shades of grey? I just feel like its very similar the whole way through
ReplyDeleteI really, really like the part "I earned every cent". TOO COOL!
ReplyDeleteI have to agree with sara and lauren. The whole speech is consistent, but also kind of predictable. Gray and music might help; not sure.
The "public life" does seem a bit awkward in its movement.
Remember to fix the "Never Justice" part, where some of the white in Justice seem to be poking out.
Great Job!
Good job so far. The only weird part I saw was the odd overlapping of 'never' over 'justice' but that should be fairly simple to fix.
ReplyDeleteI like the simplicity of your video. It makes the movement pop more. I like the use of the camera as well. Just keep doing what you're doing and it will look great.
ReplyDeleteI really like yours, I think its looking good. I like the "earned every cent" sequence when you change out the word....very clever
ReplyDeleteThe way the type moves and the speed at which you have the transitions happening completely matches the way that the speaker talks. I think that you have a very good variety of transitions.
ReplyDeleteI like your TV a lot better now that you changed it. Great transitions!
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